Rating

"I think this is the best book I have ever read. I loved everything from there journeys when they were young them being apart and getting back together.It truly was an amazing experience reading the book"

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"LightQuest:Volume 1: Ailsa's Story"

"the Story is of two youngsters of different Genre, spending a short time together, then apart, and once again, together on Ben's Planet. The were brought together as Ailsa was adept with the Pull, and Ben with the skye. Their first kiss in a tree, was accepting by both Ben and Ailsa, now reaching Puberty. They continued training in combat styles, and life forces as well......The Plot is slowly drawing near, as the two, Ailsa and Ben become experts, masters. The story was interesting, flowed well, and the characters were many, but Ben and Ailsa were the main characters now and to follow....... Jabberwocky, some work on grammar would help, punctuation as well, but your technical skill is really good. I will be happy to refer your work to my friends to read and buy.............good job......"

Light Quest

"I think that this story is written with a grace and power that gives the reader a sense of gentle and strong. With a knowledge of confidence and unity. The writer shows a good imagination and control. With compassion and care. The story line is right on spot.plot is twists and turns that throw the reader off at times but begins to show a little more to the reader at times. Good book am enjoying reading it."

Unique

"I found the book was something different to what I would normally read. The plot generally unfolded well. The writer's style was unique and had a distinctive voice. This is something I rate very highly and I'm sure many people would appreciate it; the only reason I've given only three stars is because it just wasn't as much for me as others. But a very talented author and if this sort of book is your thing, it is absolutely marvellous."

Unusual

"The beginning of this story has a good flow and introduces the readers to the place and the characters in a descriptive, and a very interesting, way. The story is pretty unusual and I suppose that it took a lot of imagination to write something like this. It is rather mysterious and yet revealing. The plot is thrilling and exciting, but I would recommend making it a bit more dynamic, since I felt like the whole story is developing at a slow pace. However, I feel that this is probably not the end of the story, since the last Chapter ends so abruptly and with a cliffhanger. Although it does say “finale”. I am a bit confused by this. Be as it may, I have enjoyed reading the story and I must commend your style of writing, which is very rich, eloquent, interesting and captivating."

Lightquest

"Hi Jaberwocky. I read your story, most of it. I think it is a beautiful story, and as a narrative it can be engaging. The problem I had was it was slow. So much exposition and so little dialogue. I just felt that there needed to be more engagement of my visceral senses. More power, more danger, more excitement. Its a new world but I never got the sense of WHY these two were in love. What made them fall for each other? It seemed like a plot device. And the PULL? Man, I'm sorry but I just didn't get it. And reading all those words with no dialogue? That's dangerous for a new writer in my opinion. You have to set the pace and the tone to make me feel the excitement. The world building was O.K but also left me with more questions that the longer it took to answer the less interested I became. I think that your passion for writing and your words do show up here very well and I was intrigued by this great new planet. It just did not reach into my mind and paint the picture. Don't mind me though, I am only one small man and I only have one opinion. I wish you the best of luck and I think the story will be great!"