What is your opinion?
Never kiss and tell
"I love the plot so far it’s really interesting and catchy. I would tell all my friends about it cause we have the same style in books. I gave this rating Because I enjoy the book ."
Never kiss and tell
"Post faster pleaseeeee😭😭😭"
Funny and humorous
"The writing is so funny that I am hooked to it. The story lune is great keeping the reader hooked. I love the cute rivals and the interesting start. But there are many typos and mistakes in spelling which I am sure will soon be fixed. Nevertheless, The author has a lot of pptential and I have a feeling it promises a great young adult novel and will turn many teens like me to reading"
Corrections...
"Okay, despite the lethal amount of profanities used, your story was actually going really well. I enjoyed it from the moment I read the blurb. I would recommend using Grammarly or LanguageTool when you have to edit your books. You have a lot of errors and your dialogues are all over the place. Of course these are not biased thoughts, they are kind criticism. So, please keep that in mind, thank you! You have a lovely storyline and I like it. It is simple, and yet I know you would bring something very intense to their small world. For your dialogues, I think you should put each spoken line of a different character in a different line. Sometimes it was difficult just knowing who was speaking too. You also need to attach dialogue tags where needed too. I should also mention that commas play an important role and your spelling requires a bit of touching up too. Hopefully, your corrections would allow me to change my views on your book, and it would help you to perfect or at least improve on your writing. Please continue writing and know that I enjoyed your book immensely."
