Inkitt
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INSPIRING!!

"Again, shout out and wild applause to the author, who is dedicating this story to domestic violence shelters. It takes bravery and an open mind to take such a huge step, and I wish you all the luck in fulfilling your intention. This story captures the reality of different abusive situations, and presents how each individual—be it the protagonist or any of her friends—deal with it and fight to recover from it. Mika shows the readers how being together as one solid unit and slowly and patiently building courage to acknowledge our fears and conquer them, is the right way to get back into a healthy life. The issues discussed are so delicate and serious, and Mika vividly delivers each bit of emotion right to reader's heart. Connecting with all her characters, the feel of being with them was like a warm blanket wrapped around me, telling me that things will be fine. The story gently whispers "You're not alone." Aislynn is a smart, witty, kind-hearted, and uplifting. And I like watching her as she realizes the reality of her situation and builds up strength to face it. I liked seeing her in different situations (drunken Aislynn was fun). Character development is really important, and I can clearly see that through each chapter. Interactions between characters are so smooth. Saying that the descriptions are vivid and colorful is an understatement (wondering if English language has a bigger word). The way you depict the five senses is incredibly alluring, although, when you go into meticulous details, it felt a bit annoying for me. I'm loving it so far, living it so vividly, and the last chapter left me on my seat!! Waiting for more! Fabulous! :)"

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Keeps your attention!

"This story is definitely worth looking into. It's interesting from the start, and keeps you invested in the main character's story. The side characters are no different. You may not like them, but that's definitely the point! I highly recommend if you're into seeing the darker side of relationships."

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DAMN!!!!!

"The author is FREAKING AMAZING. I love the plot, it's abit fast paced and sentences do run a bit long. However, the plot is amazing, honestly. The author is very creative in cleverly describing the environment and while still letting us know the emotions of the main character. The main character Aislynn is so sarcastically smart, she add uniqueness to the novel while giving you a good laugh. The novel seems well rehearsed and planned. I'm only by chapter 3 now and I think it's AMAZING! I LOVE IT, please give us more!"

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