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The Cork Druid

"Great read, full of unexpected twists and turns. People aren't always what they seem, and that's certainly true in this story. Interesting plot, makes for an exciting read. Well done, I recommend you give this book a good look in."

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the cork druid

"This book just like the one before it that I read it seems like the altar is from a different country and is writing in broken English and doesn't know how to put the sentences together it's really really frustrating I finished it the second one by this Arthur cuz it was a good book but it took me a while I had to read it and then figure out what he's trying to say and then fix it in my head and then go if your senses more and then do it again it was very annoying but as far as telling the story it was good sorry author you need to take some English classes and learn how to write a book in English"

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The cork Druid

"Great detective story. Intriguing. Nice storyline. "

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The Cork Druid

"I enjoyed your story, at first it seemed full of grammatical errors, but it may just be the Irish language differences. I really enjoyed the setting in Cork and the characters were great! Keep writing!"

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Intriguing

"Reading this story took a lot of time, but it felt like I read it in 15 minutes. It was just so exciting, intriguing and thrilling. The plot is complex and mysterious, and so interesting that I could not stop reading this. Your style of writing is amazing, simply captivating. I really enjoyed it. I loved the tension, the mystery and the doubt in everyone, which are all the elements of a real crime story. You wrote so many details and they are all linked together, they are all relevant – the details from the beginning of the story serve their purpose in the very end. This is simply amazing and I can tell that writing this wasn’t at all simple. You have worked hard, that is my impression. However, the one thing that I would recommend is further editing and proofreading. There are a lot of spelling mistakes, mistakes in verb tenses etc. The story would be considered more serious if there were no mistakes like this. P.S. This would make a great movie."

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The Cork Druid

"Punctuation and grammar is non existent, made reading difficult, but good story and characters"

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