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Good

"I like the story it does drag out a bit at times but it’s okay bc it’s still a really good read"

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Joy

"Very good story. I enjoyed it"

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👀 suspense, passion 🔥 👀!!!!!

"To author 😍: aside from the grammatical errors, you have such an incredible can't-put-down book on your hands!!!! Filled with a lot of drama, great details, suspense, Felix's POV, humor, chemistry, steamy moments, range if emotions & history....oh my!! This was such a moving, captivating can't-put-down book. If we knew their ages & their physical descriptions like hair or eye color that would add to their characters. What happened to Bruno? Did Felix kill him? How many years apart are Felix & Emma? What was the reason her parents were killed? Did her sister Rosa commit suicide or was her death planned by someone else? I'm looking forward to reading your 2nd book. Maybe I would get my questions answered?? Great job!!! Thank you for your amazing imagination, talent and addictive can't-put-down book 🔥!!!!"

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👏👏👏to the author!!!love it!!

"Thank u for this wonderful "Obra" Looking forward for your next book!! ❤️❤️❤️ Good luck and God bless!!!"

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Another bad disission

"Plz add more I want to see how there life turns out this book was great and I happen there’s more I love it so much 🥺🥺❤️❤️"

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Just Another Bad Decision

"A really enjoyable short story that never felt rushed; very well written "

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Reading this isn’t a bad decision at all!

"Short but extremely intense. Emotional roller coaster ride from hope to heartbreak and everything in between. I loved that the characters aren’t perfect. They are perfectly imperfect and absolutely real. Bravo author thank you for writing such an amazing story! Mobster meets klutz with interesting results. Absolutely recommend reading"

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not bad at all

"very good story. short but it's all there. good twist and plot. a little spelling error but fixable. all in all, great writing, author."

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Nice book to read, but needs work

"Sighed not signed when he's breathing in frustration. There are other words that need working on, but right now, I can't remember them. Please don't take my constructive criticism as negative, but positive to help you with your writing. I do like the story and am very interested since I have all three books in my library right now."

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Just another bad decision

"I feel like I am no one to judge but I thought your art was wonderful I am grateful you shared your work . although there were a few errors I truly enjoyed and would recommend that bothers take the time to read this one and I will b looking into your other works "

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