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Almost perfect! :)

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Zion's Great Dire

"Interesting story, but, in my eyes, not as good as the Genesis book. Thanks Author (sorry, the Calliope's series were written by another author.... my mistake)"

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Zion's great dire

"Fantastic character and an amazing story, if you into super naturals, werewolves and witches. The unexplained and incredible universe. This book is for you."

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ZION's GREAT DIRE

"FANTASIC Book! I was hooked from the very beginning and stayed that way until I had finished. The plotline was well thought out and the story flowed smoothly. This book is skillfully done and I look forward to reading more (hopefully from this storyline)."

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Great story

"Great story! Hoping to see more by this author soon! Enjoyed the thrill of the story. Wishing the final battle had a little more detail. Would have liked to seen more of the story for the transition to the new pack. Overall great read "

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Loved it

"Great story line Loved the way you have written thw story"

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AMAZING STORY!

"I thought the story was amazing! Easy to understand with the right imagination. It was a nice ending to the two stories. Azah’s journey and Zion’s. I recommend this for everyone to read, especially the first book. Continue the great work! "

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Zions Great Dire

"Wonderful story well written"

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Zion's Great Dire

"This was a good ending to the previous story but was a bit confusing."

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