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What Flash Fiction Should Be

"What a creepy little morsel of a story! As quick as this story is it grabbed me immediately. The use of language is perfect and I second that motion from the previous reviwer. It is refreshing to read a piece not riddled with big words and long decriptives. I look forward to reading more!"

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homecoming review

"One of the rules of writing is never use a big word when a small one will do. I enjoyed reading this story because the words suited the emotion that I think the writer wanted to evoke in the reader. There is a nice little twist not to far away from the end. First there's a question, the girl did it? no, couldn't be. Then was it the father? And then one has to read again. I think that was nicely done. Thanks for letting me read 'Homecoming'"

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