Engaging

"This is what excites me about the realm of online horror stories. Sometimes you come across someone who does something a bit different and it pays off in spades. The writing style of this story is wonderful and engaging. The story is an old idea brought back to life with a refreshing look. If there were any puctuation or grammer issues while I was reading this I didn't notice. I was too wrapped up in it wanting to see how it neded."