What is your opinion?
The First Fall
"I've finished reading your amazing and warm story more than a week ago, and I really enjoyed every bit of it, including the song. You have a good plot and a great and diverse cast of characters, and I couldn't help but feel that Jamie is so close in character to you. Your characters are so realistic, starting from their different thoughts about Christmas and how they tackle their problems, and ending with their relationships with one another. I love how Jamie and Elle interact and support one another. Kade and Jamie are so adorable and I love how this chemistry and attraction between them bloomed into love. And the fight between Elle and Scott was so funny I couldn't help but picture it. You even showed us that Christmas isn't a perfect holiday for everyone, but what makes it whole is having your favorite people around you. I'm always amazed by your knowledge of history, old movies, and songs. And what completed everything was your song—I left a comment on the video by the way. Technically, there's repetition of using 'as' to show that something is happening right when something else is happening. There are also tiny mistakes in dialogue punctuation, check this link if you want: https://thewritelife.com/dialogue-tags I loved your story, Jo, and I enjoyed every bit of it. I hope it's not late to say, Merry Christmas and Happy New Year!! 👑❤"
A Lovely Little Holiday Tale
"If you're looking for a nice, warm Christmas holiday tale, look no further. Within these pages is a well written story that broaches friendship despite differences in opinion. As a freshly-written story, I was impressed with the minimal grammatical errors, all of which will be easily fixed in a future update. I definitely recommend this heartfelt read before the holidays are completely over this year! "
