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Kevin

"Great story"

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Salvation Station

"Very interesting read and plot. Kept you coming back. Very good book!"

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Salvation Station

"I enjoyed this story immensely. I never grew bored of the story line or the characters. This story is definitely a credit to the author and I would be keen to read future stories. An exceptional read."

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Celebration Station

"Did like this one very interesting I can't believe they'd be somebody as bad as Susanna but there are really people in the world like that it's a shame you know using Christ to do evil you did good Arthur I appreciate it"

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Powerful story

"An eerie and unsettling murder mystery that ties the lives of three strong individuals together. What could be better than that? I love the suspense and drama you’ve managed to create with your writing as it makes the story extremely enjoyable to read. You’re a talented writer, and I hope to read more of your work soon. However, I did notice some issues with the way your sentences are structured. You’ve got a good way of conveying emotions, but I feel your actual writing needs to be more clear and concise if you want to communicate with the reader. This story is by no means an easy-read as some sentences were convoluted enough for me to go over them at least twice. If you really want to make the book stand out, I suggest re-reading the story and making the sentences as simple as possible."

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