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Don't give Up! Don't give In!

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Poems...

Status
Excerpt
Chapters
1
Rating
5.0 (1 review)
Age Rating
16+

Don't give Up! Don't give In!

The walk you have walked.

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The trial you have faced.

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You give it your all!

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Yet you have failed!

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"Failure!" They laughed.

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You run here! There! And everywhere!

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Screaming for help in silence.

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But nobody knows.

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Their hateful words keep repeating.

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In your mind.

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"A total failure!"

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Don't give up! Don't give in!

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Their hateful words are nothing.

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Their dreadful laughter is letting you know that you are better than them.

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Don't give up! Don't give in!

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"You'll never make it! Your effort will all go to waste." They laughed.

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"You will fail again and again till you give up!" They smiled at you.

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Don't give up! Don't give in!

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They are just scared of failing!

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Try again! Fail again!

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You are only failing because

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You'll make it!

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Don't give in! Don't give up!

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Whatever they say! Is what they are.

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"Your looks are laughable! You are unphotographable!" They laughed at you.

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But!

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Don't give up! Don't give in!

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They are not who they seem to be.

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They hide their true self behind their fake words.

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Don't give up! Don't give in!

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You're beautiful just the way you are.

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Broken dreams can still make successful people.

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Don't give up! Don't give in!

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Not everything in life has an answer.

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Google answers everything.

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Yet! It's unable to tell you who you are.

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Don't give in! Don't give up!

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Whatever they say! They say!

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You weren't born to please anybody.

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Don't try to please anybody but yourself.

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If you wore a witch hat and sat on a broomstick. Makes you happy! Then do it!

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Don't give up! Don't give in!

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They'll always have something to say.

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You weren't born to be used and thrown away.

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You weren't born to please anyone but yourself.

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You weren't born to be the hero of society.

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Don't give up! Don't give in!

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You're the writer and keeper of your story,

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If you want it to be bright and happy.

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If you want it to be gloomy and dear.

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You can make it whatever you want.

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Don't give up! Don't give in!

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Hold fast to your dream!

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For if your dream dies your life becomes like a bird with a broken wing.

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Don't give up! Don't give in!

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Life will only treat you the way you see

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yourself.

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Don't give up! Don't give in!

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You're worth it.

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©chris_yash

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Are you enjoying my ongoing story? Please let me know what you think by leaving a review! Thanks, Yash - Chris

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Nice poem

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