What is your opinion?
Loved it
"I loved that you chose a story like this so Graphic and goring, my favorite type of stories "
Work good!
"This is not really my style of book, but it is commendable that you had such a vivid imagination of it all. For your story structure, I am awaiting to see a conflicted piece that might trigger something exciting and so huge, it must be exhilarating. Your plot was going good, I have no issues at the moment and for characters development, I think you need to work and expand more on who and what your characters are supposed to be. Also, for dialogues, I would recommend that you put each line for each person as they have a conversation. If two persons are talking with one another, your reader would most likely want to understand what is happening. Once again, I don't think there is anything that I should say, so for the first review, hopefully this helps to better your writing."
