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When Vampires Ruled The World

"This book is good "

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Nice Story

"The book was very well written and flowed smoothly "

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When Vampires Ruled the World

"Great book, Any chance on a sequel??"

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Good

"Great story"

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When vampires ruled the world

"This was a beautiful story I loved this book wonderful ending ❤️"

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I enjoyed this story so much

"It's a very beautiful story."

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When vampires ruled the world

"Loved storey from beginning to end, loved characters, such a great love storey , gutted when I neared the end , the storey was that good. Definitely going to look forward to reading more novels from you ."

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When Vampires Ruled The World

"I like this book so much "

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I Love Vampire Stories

"A adventurous Vampire tale that will keep you thinking, ‘just one more chapter’. I was happily surprised when the truth of the Vampire matter was a surprise twist. Enjoyed this story a lot. "

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When vampires ruled the world

"It was quite an interesting story."

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When vampires ruled the world

"What a wonderful story. Needs editing, but overall I enjoyed it very much! It was different in a very good way.❤️❤️❤️"

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When Vampires Ruled The World

"Very good story. Liked reading the story."

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When vampires ruled the world

"The plot is really good it keeps you engaged the story"

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When vampires ruled the world

"Very good book,must read,and highly recommended,wouldn’t change a thing "

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When vampires ruled the world

"I like everything about this story it keeps you interested the whole time There is nothing I dislike about it. I like all the characters in it. "

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Good read

"Great story I couldn’t put it down "

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When Vampires Ruled the World

"I love the plot. It's an interesting take on vampire world domination. I do get the feeling that the author is either young, inexperienced with writing, or that English may not be a first language. Why I say this is because the phrase "to where" appears quite often. Example, to where I feel". Most would not use that phrase all that often, at least not with American English. I also feel the characters could be developed a little more to be more believable. As it is, Hannah comes across as either savvy, naïve, shallow, or plain stupid depending on the situation. Overall, I do feel the book is worth reading but if you are looking for a perfectly developed and written story, this is not it."

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Vampires ruled the world

"I love the story idea. But sometimes I feel like it was wrote by a junior high kid. I think it can be developed better."

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Potential to be great

"Great plot and story but the writing style is inconsistent and locks flow. Love the story, but it needs a strong writing skills to make it amazing. "

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