Chariot 3

"It was a great story. The fight scenes were fairly well described. It even had some humor to lighten the tension. And most importantly it had a good ending!"

Chariot 3: Conception

"The strange choice of words at times made me think that this story was translated. A little editing would take care of that. Overall, I thought it was a great read. Great characters, and fantastic, suspenseful action throughout. Thank you for the read!"

Fun read

"I liked the correlations between fact and fiction. Fun read. "

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Not bad,quite good

"Reads like it’s been through a poor language translation, very bad grammar and spelling "

Chariot 3: Conception

"Although some editing is needed, this was very to read. Just might read it again."

Chariot 3: Conception

" The story nicely accounts for a handful of actual historical events, making it not just sci-fi and time travel, but perhaps also alternative history. It was great fun to read this, and hard to stop once I started! This work could greatly benefit by being run through a grammar-checker. There are many instances where a native English speaker would be more likely to use different prepositions. As well, possessives should be spell-checked; they often appear with the pattern: Xxxx ‘s (with a space, a backwards apostrophe, then an “s”) when they should be: Xxxx’s Nevertheless, I look forward to buying the author’s work in real-book form one day, because good writing deserves permanence!"

Good book.

"Thank you! I enjoyed reading it."

Thrilling

"Although this is a very long story, there is not one sentence that bored me while I was reading it and every single Chapter is there for a very good reason. The descriptions in the story are great, and so is the characterization – all which shows that you are a great, talented author. There are many amusing, emotional, intense and adventurous scenes that have stayed etched into my mind after reading this. Something that amazed me (when it comes to your imagination and shows that you’ve spent a lot of time working on this novel) is the scene when Ezekiel joins them all and how everything seems to change for him after they install a “Brain Computer Interface” into his body. The scene when Inanna finds out the true mission of the crew and becomes aware of the fact that they won’t be coming back is very emotional and made me feel for her. However, seconds later, she is able to put a smile on her face and great V-nus, who has returned together with the rest of the crew. Their reunion was very amusing. I loved this story."

This story

"fairly good read. i like the reference to current legend."