What is your opinion?
Kudos for writing such a masterpiece
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(The Siribi Chronicles) Anansi's web
"This story was overall enjoyable, I found the characters very fleshed out, and the plot so far, is interesting. The world created is well built, and ties well into the plot. You can tell effort was put into this story. I would say that the main character is not quite as interesting as the side characters so far, but that's not saying he's bad. Overall, I found this a good story, and I will continue."
AllSaints4
"Only on the third chapter but thought I'd share my impression so far. The writing is smooth and infectious. It teases you into a world with uncommon ease and slickness. Dialogue is fun and punchy and the narrative rich and fully formed. Loving it so far...Good Job sir."
A delightful read
"I like the protagonist Angelo and how he has this curiosity that never seems to be satiated. Your character development is spot on, and I’m glad I decided to read this story. Of course, I haven’t finished the whole thing yet, but I plan on doing so! You’re a good storyteller, and I like how you’ve humanised the characters in this story, making them easier to relate to. I enjoyed the way you’ve interwoven regular, human life along with this demonic reality that people live in. If I had to give you one piece of advice though, it would be to slow down on the pace a little bit. Your story is great but you’ve packed too much detail into one chapter, making it difficult to remember everything. Besides this one small issue, great story and I wish you luck for your future!"
