What is your opinion?
Promising!
"Okay, the story is in it's infancy but...I like the premisse of it! With a bit of polishing in a sense that some scenes need work pacing wise, and well I can't say much about character deapth from five chapters but I think the story has great potential!!! It's fairly entertaining and I would love to know where it will go from here, so on that note keep at it author!!!! Keep up the good work 😁👍"
Nice shot :)
"The story is quite interesting ! We have intrigue right from the beginning, it has catch the eye. Only one thing: maybe not make such large spaces between sentences? Because the whole text merged into one. But apart this, it is actually very cool story! Waiting for next chapter :)"
Cool idea!
"I love the idea of an all female pack! She is one badass lead as well! I found myself excited to turn each page, which is always a good sign ;) A few little pacing issues and some scenes that could be drawn out a little to make them more intense and hit a little harder emotionally, but the plot is super creative and well executed! I am really impressed with the dialogue between the characters. Good job!"
