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Excalibur

"Amazingly well placed. Continue..."

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Excalibur- world from ashes

"I loved how he just (I'm assuming) died at the end, becuz that's how life is. He didn't avenge Alik, or anything it was just all left incomplete and that's how life is a happy ending isn't always ensured. But I sincerely do hope that atleast an epilogue will be posted from someone else's P.O.V becuz I just have to know what happened to all the characters. But aside from that great book. Would definitely recommend "

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Excalibur

"Please tell me there is going to be more! Did Kilia save him? Did Valkyrie and Tristan stay together? Did Tristan find out about what Ahemil did to Valkyrie? Did Jace and Zak find love? Please more!!!"

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Unexpected and what a cliffhanger.

"Nooo- a cliffhanger! What an interesting story though. I was getting really annoyed with Valkyrie but his faults make him more human. I like the characters of the other 4 main characters- Tristan, Jace, Zak and Kilia. Alix is very scary and focused on getting what he wants. I know how I want this to end and I’m rooting for the cure! "

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Excellent reading

"Great plot, and writing style. Good to show gays do other then just running around each other looking for sex, most other stories out there. How the drug affected the people, too far fetched and removed from the story, maybe it could have given them super-strength or other related to their own body, would have made it more plausible. Some grammar typos, but nothing too drastic to remove from the enjoyment of the story. Ending unconventional, loved it. Great writing, shows potential."

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World of Ashes

"This book is an amazing mix of adventure and romance. The author has an amazing writing style and plot that leaves you on the edge of your seat. I also love how it isn't your normal gay story that is souly about being gay, it gives us representation but it's still an amazing story. 10/10, great work."

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Awesomesauce with a cherry on top

"Was lit the first time I read it, and now it's 101% as good! Love how you get a taste of survival and action right at the start, which later evolves into romance which melts your heart with sweetness! The characterization is steaming from get-go; Valkyrie's got an amazeball train of thoughts to follow (though Jace will always be my favorite). The whole supernatural thing is the icing on the cake, and throw in gang wars? You never know what's cooking. Sorry about the food references I'm just really hungry okay."

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Favorite

"The reason I adore this book is because of Valkyrie. While he is supposed to be the 'twink' he is quite the change from the overly submissive personalties most people give twinkish characters. What is special to me about they book is that there are so many emotions woven into it: love, hate, sadness, happiness, anger, fear, and a hella lot more. I'd recommend this book to anyone that wants a great plot, amazing characters, good flow, erotic scenes, and top notch writing."

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Still a wonderful book in my opinion!

"Reading this book just brings back the memory's of when it was still being written on another writing site, I still get a feeling of nostalgia. The characters and there personalities are wonderful and protective sometimes."

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Best story

"That was brilliant it even sparked an idea I’d be curious to share."

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Excalibur by SirynSueng

"I really enjoyed this book! The plot started off a bit stereotypically, but as it moved forward it got a lot more interesting. I can't wait for book two!"

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Book 2

"That's it? Cliffhanger"

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Loved it so far!

"I’m sorry but I didn’t have a lot of time, so I read only the first two chapters of this story. But I felt like I needed to leave a review on this novel. I love the tone and the direction of the story and your writing is spot on. I’d say you're a fairly decent writer, and you definitely have a lot more stories in you just waiting to come out. One thing I did notice, however, is the kind of tense you use in your sentences. As in, the past, present, and future tense. There were many sentences where you started off with the present and then switched to the past tense. You need to be careful of errors like this, because it dissuades an avid reader from continuing to read the book. Besides this issue, I didn't really notice anything else amiss in the first two chapters. Of course, you can improve your writing skills and make the story stand out even more, but great job anyway!"

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In suspense

"That book was intense, but the finish leave the door open for a second one... Personnally i was expecting for Killia to find a cure and save him."

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excabliur

"gud it's nice actually "

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Excalibur ~ World from Ashes

"Not my cup-a-tea kind of book. The story of a gang war in an apocalyptic world sounds fantastic, and it's a brilliant idea. I just can't get past Who the "lovers" are. Sorry . . ."

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