What is your opinion?
Don't stop writing
"Hi! I just want to say that your lyrics are amazing, relatable, and painful. In your first song, first stanza, the line "I'm not ready to say goodbye" has a piercing impact on those people who gives their all but receives nothing but shame from their loved one. They want to hold on to the idea that everything will be better, but at the same time they can't hold on anymore. But as the song progresses, the line "Now I'm ready to go" in the bridge somehow made me sigh in relief because a decision has been made, and it is to let go in able to heal and find the self. Your second song has an entirely different feel. It is for reminiscing the happy moments in the moment of letting go of the person who once made you feel happy. I love this one because of the story engraved on it. From "The day we first met" to "But I need you to let me go". The rollercoaster ride from meeting a person who you know would be the protagonist in this chapter of your life to saying goodbye because it just didn't work out the way you wanted it to be. Lyrics like these are great in their rawest form, you might do some editing and developments in the future, but in their rawest form are the rawest feeling. Thank you again for sharing it with me."
Potential
"Both songs the author wrote just shows how much potential they have for song writing and how good of a song writer they are."
