Create New List
Share with your friends
Customize readability

Exiled

All Rights Reserved ©

Summary

In a land of magic and mystery lies a world named Qaeda made up of 7 islands three belonging to the werewolves Blood Moon Island, Lunar Island and Artic Island, the next three belong to the vampires Inferno Island, Hollow Island and Bloodlust Island. Then there's the human island where Lyla Ward is from a small village named Gaea in the kingdom of Belgae ruled by a harsh king named Fen. When Lyla and her best friend go on a trip to gather herbs for their families Lyla exposes her abilities and finds herself in the hands of the king's guard. What will happen when she is exiled to the land of the beast? What happens when all her senses change, and she becomes something she once despised?

Status
4yrs ago
Chapters
21
Rating
4.8 (16 reviews)
Age Rating
18+

Prologue

Exiled...

In a land of magic and mystery lies a world named Qaeda made up of 7 islands three belonging to the werewolves Blood Moon Island, Lunar Island and Artic Island, the next three belong to the vampires Inferno Island, Hollow Island and Bloodlust Island. Then there’s the human island where Lyla Ward is from a small village named Gaea in the kingdom of Belgae ruled by a harsh king named Fen. When Lyla and her best friend go on a trip to gather herbs for their families Lyla exposes her abilities and finds herself in the hands of the king's guard. What will happen when she is exiled to the land of the beast? What happens when all her senses change, and she becomes something she once despised?

Let Avidea Onyx know what you thought about this chapter!
Love this

1

Love this

Funny

0

Funny

Spicy

0

Spicy

Suspenseful

0

Suspenseful

Emotional

0

Emotional

Profound

0

Profound

Heartwarming

0

Heartwarming

Shocking

0

Shocking

Good Writing

1

Good Writing

Compelling Plot

0

Compelling Plot

Great Character

0

Great Character

Strong Dialog

0

Strong Dialog

author

I feel-no I know it's going to be good.

4 years
1
author

Hi Avidea Onyx,

I recently went through your story Exiled and I loved it so much. Your writing is amazing, and I kept thinking how visually gripping it would be as a comic.

I loved the moment in the prologue when Lyla’s exposure of her forbidden abilities leads to her being seized by the king’s guards and exiled to a land of beasts she once feared. That emotional upheaval and sense of betrayal would shine in a comic panel, capturing her transformation and raw vulnerability perfectly.

I specialize in adapting stories into manga/comics, and I’d love to bring your story to life in comic form. No pressure your work would look incredible visually. If you’re open to a paid collaboration, I’d love to chat.

You can check out my recent work on my portfolio: https://digitalstrokes.carrd.co/
If you’d like to explore further, feel free to message me on Discord—Username peterjones_90.

Regards
Peter

a year

Further Recommendations

Bloodlines

karenfancp: I have noticed a few typos, the story line is good. I can’t put this down.

Read Now
The Contract Wife

Linda: Plot is good but a little repetitive. Recommend for readers who like an easy ready, simple storyline.

Read Now
Called by the Alpha

Sylvia Jeffree: It’s not bad at all Fast moving and interesting I will certainly recommend this author

Read Now
Married by Fate

Jacqueline: The knowledge that they would fall in love was so clear from the start, even without the quiet whispers. So delightful to read!

Read Now
The Orc's Pet

JyotiRekha: Great plot Describe the life of orcos moe

Read Now
Exile in Flames

Robin: I super quick read with love and intrigue. I'm glad I found this one.

Read Now
Light at the End of the Track

EB: I loved the writing and the plot. Beautiful and heartwarming story. Amazing work.

Read Now
Going For The Goalie

NN: It got me from chapter 1. I’m sad it ended, but I loved the whole story. It was very emotional to read parts of it, and the dynamics, characters, and plot twists were amazing. I’d like to have an epilogue... 10years from now. What happened to Dewey? Even Jordan hahahaha

Read Now
Exiled