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Exiled

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Summary

In a land of magic and mystery lies a world named Qaeda made up of 7 islands three belonging to the werewolves Blood Moon Island, Lunar Island and Artic Island, the next three belong to the vampires Inferno Island, Hollow Island and Bloodlust Island. Then there's the human island where Lyla Ward is from a small village named Gaea in the kingdom of Belgae ruled by a harsh king named Fen. When Lyla and her best friend go on a trip to gather herbs for their families Lyla exposes her abilities and finds herself in the hands of the king's guard. What will happen when she is exiled to the land of the beast? What happens when all her senses change, and she becomes something she once despised?

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
21
Rating
4.8 16 reviews
Age Rating
18+

Prologue

Exiled...

In a land of magic and mystery lies a world named Qaeda made up of 7 islands three belonging to the werewolves Blood Moon Island, Lunar Island and Artic Island, the next three belong to the vampires Inferno Island, Hollow Island and Bloodlust Island. Then there’s the human island where Lyla Ward is from a small village named Gaea in the kingdom of Belgae ruled by a harsh king named Fen. When Lyla and her best friend go on a trip to gather herbs for their families Lyla exposes her abilities and finds herself in the hands of the king's guard. What will happen when she is exiled to the land of the beast? What happens when all her senses change, and she becomes something she once despised?

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Hi Avidea Onyx,

I recently went through your story Exiled and I loved it so much. Your writing is amazing, and I kept thinking how visually gripping it would be as a comic.

I loved the moment in the prologue when Lyla’s exposure of her forbidden abilities leads to her being seized by the king’s guards and exiled to a land of beasts she once feared. That emotional upheaval and sense of betrayal would shine in a comic panel, capturing her transformation and raw vulnerability perfectly.

I specialize in adapting stories into manga/comics, and I’d love to bring your story to life in comic form. No pressure your work would look incredible visually. If you’re open to a paid collaboration, I’d love to chat.

You can check out my recent work on my portfolio: https://digitalstrokes.carrd.co/
If you’d like to explore further, feel free to message me on Discord—Username peterjones_90.

Regards
Peter

a year

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