A character I created to add to gta 5 story similar start to franklin they meet in the garage
Jack Murray who was born in 1992 in Los santos as he was raised on the streets with buddy Franklin and lamar as he was the only one dude who lived on the streets with a black community's based. As Jack had no family after leaving his care home 2 years ago. He would spend the days repo and recently working for simeone who would value Jack and Franklin and lamar for there skills.0
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