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Original and Sad

"An original take on a werewolf story full of action and a surprising amount of grief. I loved the dialogue between Oswald and Bran, the implication that maybe something else had taken over and the heavy emotion of Oswald's belief that he would never get home. Very well-written, I loved every chapter."

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Epic Bone Chilling tale

"Your writing style is divine. The imagery within the words pulled me into the story from the beginning. I normally don’t read werewolf tales but this story was epic and I loved it! Phenomenal job! Five stars and one of favorite stories I’ve on Inkitt."

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"Who's arm is it anyway!"

"TAGS: $Review Swap$, Read to Chapter 5 - Because that's all that was written! (WIP) SUMMARY: A special niece, two brothers, and a twisted special operations force. Set in ye olden times in a backwater of a world, monsters roam to plague mankind - some monsters use other monsters to rid the world. PROS: The scenes and characters are well put together, you are met with Bran, Oswald, and Amalia a family of monsters I am sure. There is a secret cabal of silver-masked individuals who are running a werewolf hunter group, where they use the wolves to hunt other things that go bump in the night. No grammar errors I could detect. The story is well and in a pun intended, executed. CONS: I just need more! BEST LINE: You said, “Home, Bran? We don’t go home. - Oswald OVERALL: Good for a start, you get a lot in the first three chapters, and the extended two-chapter action sequence is good. Should be a good Halloween read by the time the event comes."

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Bone Chilling and Vivid

"I had wanted to reserve my review until I was at least 3 to 4 chapters in. The only reason for this was because I was totally hooked by just reading chapter one and I wanted to see if the author could maintain the thrill and vivid visionary he had created. I have not been disappointed. I have loved reading each chapter. Each one painting the story and you cant help but get drawn into the moment. This has had me on the edge of my seat, cheering, screaming and crying. To me I was watching a movie which I just could not get enough of. It has left me wanting only more. Not your everyday around the mill werewolf story and I absolutely love it! ❤ "

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The Line

"The title of the story and book cover are very understated and in a sense misleading until you read the first chapter and feel your heart start to pound faster and realize you are hooked to this mysterious, action-packed, intense, and heartbreaking story. The author captures the complexity of the characters and their pain and struggles beautifully. It's a page turner, just wish the story to be completed. That's a major draw back. Please finish author! A must read! "

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Beautifully written!

"You are such a great author and would love to read more of your work! This book has kept me on my toes and I want to know what happens next. Keep up the amazing work!"

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The Line

"I really enjoyed the read! It pulls you in completely, and I love the suspense involved with the story. I'm excited to see where the story goes."

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