What is your opinion?
Worth It!
"I'm not into this genre, but your book was definitely worth every second I had spent reading it. The plot was good, and your writing style concerning the sex scenes were very well-written and descriptive. The inner thoughts of the characters made the reading much more enjoyable. Good job!"
Lovely
"Lovely story"
Erotic adventures 2
"Very enjoyable"
Lost Weekend
"Thank you, John, for directing me to this variation of the first Erotic Adventures. It was absolutely hilarious and I loved it, as usual. Now for number 3."
Erotic adventures 2 The lost weekend
"A well written book and soo funny. I like a sequel please.❤️❤️❤️"
A must read
"I have erotic novellas before and so do now but this one brought an entirely different experience all together. I loved the conversation between them as much as Thier inner thoughts going in their mind. The openness and the frankness with which the sexual activity is described is just wow. I have literally become a fan. The words and grammar is also quite rich. I loved it. "
The lost weekend
"Its interesting to read "
Stranger
"Little misunderstanding and vaguely story"
Well worth the second variation!
"The story starts with an excellent set up to the initial encounter between the two protagonists. It is, throughout, a thoroughly erotic and quite enjoyable read. The eroticism is detailed without being prurient. And the romance developing under the eroticism is extremely arousing. An effective use of the third person to show what each character is thinking. The first chapter ends with a wonderful cliffhanger. The only quibble I have is that the opening could be more thoroughly polished—but once over that, the story is as exhilarating as a rollercoaster!"
Good story, but perhaps over long
"I found the story amusing but somewhat tedious, with the heroine’s Victorian inner monologue overly repetitive. I mean, how many times can it be pointed out that she is almost simultaneously repelled and fascinated by his rampant member? The writing would be much improved by the services of a proofreader/editor to correct errors in punctuation and grammar. For example, an indirect quotation in third person clearly does not belong within a pair of quotation marks. Despite its glacial pace, I found the story quite charming. Keep at it!"
Kapsie
"I like the story. It is tastefully written. The characters are beautifully woven "
Cold long night
"Its good. I enjoyed reading it, just want to continue."
