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Wisp

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Summary

The wisp (or will-o-wisp) is a mythical entity often associated with both western and Japanese graveyards. It can be killed using Holy Water and can be turned to stone. People are scared of it and will run away. but those that don't fear them gain special abilities granted by the Will 'o the wisp

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
3
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Prologue//Trail before dawn


“C’mon Jackie I think we are almost there” said the 12 year old Clayton. He was very tall for his age and had an almost immature personality, as in he barely took things seriously. He had short curly black hair and was dark skinned. He also had hazel brown eyes. His little sister, Jackie is 9 years old and was very timid and frail. She had a darker color skin than her brother and her hair was white but very straight; just like her mother’s. she also had apple-red eyes. She was relatively shorter than other girls her age. “Alright Clay, I can’t wait see the lights.” She said with an almost entirely compassionate facial expression. As they walked through the mildly marshy terrain they came across a tiny blue dot fluttering around. The girl gasped in excitement while the kid, who has seen many already, smiled at his excited sister “look, it’s one of them, it’s a wisp, a wisp” said the excited Jackie. Clayton held her hand and lead her closer to the creature. It was a blue spirit with white eyes. It had a Smokey appearance and seemed jolly. It spotted them and quickly zoomed over to greet them both. The boy, who has Seem him before called it by the name Grill. In a cute little accent, the little spirit repeatedly said “Bonjour, Bonjour!” and kept phasing through them both. Another wisp with green along with a yellow one came buy zipping around and saying “Hola!” and “Amigo!” to the two kids. Jackie was so excited and happy to see all of the wisps for th first time and loved their energy. Then she saw one with a rainbow appearance that seemed static. She let go of Clayton’s hand and slowly wandered towards it. The smiling Clayton looked down to see Jackie walking to this rainbow wisp. His smile then became a face full of horror. “Don’t touch that one, Rainbow wisps are highly unstable!!!” he yelled. Before Jackie could even say ‘huh?’ the static wisp got scared by her and caused a massive explosion, making the other wisps run away. When Clayton ran to the explosion site, his sister was on the ground with a scar over her left eye and arm, while the unstable, static wisp was nowhere to be seen

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