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- fable

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Summary

A fable had served as a mechanism, that willfully listened to all of my delusions, wishes and fears. This is where I lay those emotions to rest... at least for the time being. In the end, everything is reduced to fleeting words.

Status
Complete
Chapters
30
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Tiny Legs Wander

Little tiny legs wander...

Little tiny hands reach forward.

They pray, they pray for remission,

For attention and give back submission.


Little eyes blink and blink...

Little tiny ears can’t take it all in

And yet they listen and prod,

Seek out the orders before having a ball:


Drink ’till you’re wasted!

Drink ’till you can’t care to praise them!

In the morning they gait to the shell,

Fall asleep soundly and wake up just swell.


Tired beaten legs shamble...

Tired worn arms are lost in a gamble.

Their acts to their fathers - all screwed,

The spiders seem hypnotized and rude.


Tired, blind eyes had asked for a break...

Tired, haughty ears can’t take it, they say.

It’s all just a game: obey and drink,

If that’s all there is - revolution’s no sin.

2021 I 13

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