Saving Me

"I think there are a lot of good bones to this story, but the majority hasn't been fleshed out yet. this, I'm sure, will change once you add more chapters to the story of course! The main character seems likeable and relatable enough, especially in the Y.A. genre, which is definitely something you want. His personality and quick wit are immediately apparent, and that's something I enjoyed. The main issue I see though is the execution (ie. grammar, spelling, punctuation, syntax, and structure). It's definitely worth it to have someone read through it, even if they're not a writer. :)"