What is your opinion?
Great Story
"Now I got to say, I'm not the type that usually reads these kind of stories, but this was a great story so far. You kept the romance clean not going too far especially when shawn was thinking of raina with her blue towel wrapped around her. He almost had a dirty thought but pushed that away before it gotten worse. It's good to do life lessons to show how the world is now nowadays, but not to where it will be over the top of showing the really bad things. Anywho, your story had great comedy, great bonds of friendship with one another, kindness towards others and I guess having self control over yourself of not letting your emotions or temptations get the better of you. I hope your story becomes great for all ages to enjoy"
Path to Her Heart
"It's a sweet, cute, and awkward love story between two people who were nothing more than acquaintances and are getting to know one another more. The sunflowers got my attention because those are my favorite flowers. You smoothly introduced your characters and the interactions between them were so natural and realistic regardless of the situation. I loved seeing Raina and Shawn moving past being classmates to becoming friends. It's so funny how you kept putting them in awkward situations, how Shawn teased Raina, and I like how you depicted the way a crush really starts. The pace of the story is good and the chapter length is relaxing to read. I could feel their awkwardness and embarrassment, and even their relief in the last chapter, and I can't wait to see their love blooming. Adding some problem other than having a crush on one another gives the characters some deepness. It's pretty sweet and Shawn's determination to know Raina even more excites me to read. Her hesitancy stirs questions. There's an opportunity for you to complicate things more and make the plot more engaging. Looking forward for more! :)"
Amazing
"I loke how the story goaes from being completely strangers to being friends. I like the way it develops. "
