Alpha's Girl

Susankruger

11 chapters read

Alpha's Girl

"Good story for a first book. It could've been more detailed, though."

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Amazing

"Love how the book is evolving "

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slc21225

14 chapters read

Alpha's girl

"Nice story"

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countrydb1

13 chapters read

Youngone

"I'm really enjoying this book."

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Cyndi

14 chapters read

Alpha's Girl

"I loved the Plot and the build up I was always expecting the villian to be her Dad i never expected it to be her ex -bf very exciting story I LOVED EVERY BIT OF IT!! Continue writing You have a Gift"

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Ginger Young

14 chapters read

Alpha’s Girl

"I love this book!! Great dialogue!! No offensive language & no unwanted sex chapters!! I can let my granddaughter read this !! We both love wolves & lions so we bond over them!!!! Thank you, thank you, thank you for a great story!!!"

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Vanessa

11 chapters read

Alpha girl

"👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍"

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Fatima

14 chapters read

about annie

"make a story about annie and her new maet "

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Thank you!

"I like the way this story is made because I am a big fan of werewolves and The Lost Fae story was super ( Sorry if I didn't post it over there but still) THANK YOU FOR THIS STORY ❤️❤️❤️"

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Thelene

14 chapters read

Alpha Girl

"It was a short story, but I enjoyed reading. Good work 👏 "

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donnacouden

14 chapters read

Alphas girl

"I enjoyed this book, it kept my interest so much that I didn’t put it down until the end."

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Alpha's girl

"I loved this story. So cute and sweet. You are very talented and keep your books coming. I am officially one of your fans. "

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Deniece

14 chapters read

Ha

"It was a good story . I just wanted more."

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Brooke Dunn

14 chapters read

Alphas girl

"Book is great"

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mils_28

14 chapters read

Cute Story

"Your storyline was great. I enjoyed reading your book!!!"

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miyoinouye

12 chapters read

Alpha and the White Wolf ??? Koda

"Punctuation and grammar is good. Spelling mistakes, needs to proofread before finalizing. So far it’s good, occasionally you have to reread to connect the conversation with the right person."

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cdwiese

14 chapters read

Alpha's Girl

"This story is REALLY good! I really liked it! Had some missing back story but that's okay. Had a few grammatical errors and some words that "worked" but weren't correct, if that makes sense. I'm looking forward to seeing what this author writes in the future as their confidence and knowledge grows! "

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Kittie Kat

14 chapters read

Heart warming

"I am still smiling after reading the ending. This story was well written and quickly catches your interest. The characters are well developed and the description of the scene is well written. The story certainly does not drag. It moves quickly. Keeping you on edge as to what is going to happen next. It is a bit short but definitely worth the read. Thanks. I will be watching for more stories from you. Good job."

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Sparta

11 chapters read

Great wolves story

"I love this story and this is actually my first story I’m reading on here , I love it and I don’t have any dislike about it "

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Madeline<3

13 chapters read

Alpha's girl

"It is very interesting and nice I love it "

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