What is your opinion?
Really enjoyed it
"I must admit that I was sad to see that only six parts had been published. I enjoyed reading your story; it was very entertaining for me, and I found the dialog to be a little refreshing, as it can be overdone at times. I'm not a big fantasy fan, but your story really drew me in; great work."
Great pacing, atmospheric
"So far this has been compulsively readable. Fast paced, but not too much so. An atmospheric story with a very likeable character in Vincent, and it seems his bar is being built up as a good "character" in its own right, as all good settings should be. The dialogue is both believable and entertaining. There are some typos and other small wording/punctuation issues that should be solved with a round of basic copy editing, but they're definitely not enough to detract from my enjoyment of the story. Setting and time period shifts are handled very well, as are the action scenes. I'm very interested to see where the plot goes as it progresses! Recommended for people who like atmospheric, character-driven paranormal and fantasy stories. "
