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Bertie’s Farm

"The first difficulty was in keeping all the characters names and relationships straight. Those in the city and those in the country. Then I got lost once or twice finding out where the main character was. On a plane…. Going where… and why..? It was a little hard with the plot.. I did enjoy the country living aspect. The canning, quilting, cooking, swinging on back porch with glass of ice tea. Maybe not enough farm animals…for me. "

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Bertie's Farm

"Finished your recent work in a blink of an eye , a little frustrating, need to wait for yet another chapter... Lol"

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Berta’s Farm

"I’m enjoying the storyline so far. There are, however, myriad grammatical errors & misspellings."

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Berties Farm

"A simple story, excellently told to keep your interest. A story to be started and finished. "

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Bertie's farm

"This book is a great book but somehow I feel like I'm left hanging from one chapter to another (as if the last part of every chapter is removed)"

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