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Bertie's Farm

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Summary

Why would a vaguely remembered great aunt leave her a farm in rural North Carolina? Ellie Richards is a city girl, born and bred. What she would really like to do is ignore the lawyer's letter. Why would she be interested in owning a farm located over 900 miles away from her home and business? Graham Ericson, her friend and deceased husband's law partner, warns her not to do anything rash. As he says; who better qualified than a successful interior designer to take on the restoration of a broken down farm. house. She disagrees. Since the deaths of her husband and parents in a tragic plane crash, she has been working sixty hour weeks. She is physically and mentally exhausted. After more than a few sleepless nights and countless hours of mentally debating the pros and cons of checking out the farm, she surprises herself and her friend Graham by making a decision to make a trip to Titusville. What she couldn't know is that Bertie's Farm holds long buried family secrets..

Status
4yrs ago
Chapters
26
Rating
4.2 (5 reviews)
Age Rating
18+

Prologue

"Pardon my bluntness, Ellie, but you look like something the cat dragged it."

Ellie Richards glared at her friend Graham. "Gee thanks, pal. You're just what my ego needs."

If anyone other than Graham had uttered such an offensive remark, true as it might be, Ellie would have been hurt. Graham was the exception. He and his wife Beverly were lifelong friends. They had been there to console and encourage her during the dark days following the deaths of her parents and husband in a tragic plane crash. Graham was also her deceased husband Mark's best friend at Hastings Law Firm. She put up with Graham's nagging, because he tolerated her moodiness.

When grief threated her very existence, her job at Design Element had been her salvation. Foolishly she had allowed her work to become an obsession. Gradually she had dug a deep hole for herself, a hole that lacked an escape route.

Graham moved to her side and pulled her in for a gentle hug. "El, I know you are hurting, but unless you slow down, you are going to end up in either a physician or therapist's office. Take a break. Smell the roses."

She adored the man, but even he didn't understand the depth of her heartbreak. "Thanks for your concern, Graham. I'll think about making some changes."

He looked skeptical. "I've heard that before."

"I promise."

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Hi dawsonpb,

I just finished reading your story Bertie's Farm and I loved it so much. Your writing is captivating, and I kept imagining how atmospheric and intriguing it would look as a comic.

I really loved the opening scene in the prologue where Ellie Richards, still grieving the loss of her family, receives the unexpected letter about inheriting a farm. The contrast between her city life and the rural setting of Titusville would translate perfectly into a dramatic comic panel. Also, the moment when Ellie decides to visit the farm, despite her initial reluctance, adds a layer of suspense and curiosity that would be fascinating to illustrate visually.

I’m a commissioned artist, and I’d love to bring your story to life in comic/manga form. No pressure though.I just think your work would look incredible in visual storytelling.

You can check out some of my recent artwork on my DeviantArt (Username – Ev3Verse). If you’re interested, please message me on Discord (Username – Eve_Verse) so we can discuss how to bring your story to life visually. I'll be waiting to hear from you!

Regards,
Evee

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