8 chapters read
"Fabulous story, well written, a few spelling/grammatical errors but nothing that hindered the story at all. Bit of a slow burn, but very deep and emotional. Highly recommended!"
8 chapters read
"What an amazing story!!! Love it! It is a most clear and concise story of a peaceful society I have ever read. It is a believable society...one I wish I could live in. Beautiful."
6 chapters read
"Superb Done skilfully and good ending"
0 chapters read
"I am amazed with your storytelling, great job! If you allow, may I share your book to facebook in order to reach more readers? And by the way, NovelStar is currently conducting a writing competition - You have a great potential."
8 chapters read
"Amazing story my friend hope you have many more good stories to tell. Good work and an engaging story. "
2 chapters read
"I liked the concept of this book. It's just an old person getting a second chance in life and him adjusting to the change that happened during his stasis. The plot is not thrilling but the book makes you wonder what the future would be like. Which is nice.. It's a really great book over and great job on depicting "utopia" from your perspective "
7 chapters read
"This short story is truly amazing! It can teach us, the human race, a lot about what it means to have true peace and equality. This is mostly because of the author's description and plot aline perfectly with his themes. The only issue I have is some grammatical issues that pulled me from the story from time to time. Other than that, this book is worth reading and is thought-provoking beyond belief."
8 chapters read
"This story has enlightened and uplifted me. This is what I have envisioned for humanity. I appreciate the idioms and structure and vision of the story. I believe that we as a people can achieve this future if enough of us strive for together in our daily lives using the sacred words to live by."
0 chapters read
"What an epic story. I loved the whole premise and the utopian society that didn't have any dark elements. It really was a paradise. I love the sacred words - they are ideals that we would be better off living now. Thanks for sharing."
8 chapters read
"Scientifically interesting"
8 chapters read
"Needs a bit of editing for spelling, grammar etc but very well written and a very good read. One can only hope this is where we end up, a true utopia. Looking forward to a sequel? "
8 chapters read
"Holy hell, this book is phenomenal. I was moved to tears at least a dozen times. Your writing is thoughtful, thought-provoking, inspiring and profound. I feel that my life has been truly enriched by the experience of reading this story. Thank you. "
8 chapters read
"I liked the story it made one feel many emotions and brought out a good possible future for humanity should they ever truly work together"
8 chapters read
"The plot was fantastic could have expanded to a story much larger but this format was almost to short the ending was a little abrupt and could have been expanded to give a little more depth to the story ending"
6 chapters read
"This is what we need now... this is what our world needs now. This scenario is very possible in the future. Do we need to wait for these wars to happen before we wake up? This story is worth sharing to all people of the world. PS: I noticed many times the misuse of words set and sit."
8 chapters read
"Like the novel the plot is like a book I have previously read. The cloning af a person hidden for eons in a cryogenic chamber and there intigration into the future society. "
8 chapters read
"I absolutely love this story so far. It really highlights some key factors that the human race could improve on, and really helps the reader understand the author's point of view. I would reccomend this story to anyone who reads David Brin type books. I would enjoy this book in print, as it is a book that really makes you think."
6 chapters read
"Very interesting Sci-Fi book about a man coming back to life (Not a zombie, of course!) Lots of humour, very nicely laid out. Would definitely recommend that you take the time to read it!"
8 chapters read
"Please continue to update or the next chapter in this fascinating tale that you continue to weave around us thank you so much you're amazing! 💖"
8 chapters read
"I love the concept that you have laid out, however your grammar and technical writing skills need a little bit more work, maybe have someone proofread for you before you publish. Otherwise, thank you for the amazing plot. I love it so far. "