What is your opinion?
Good book!
"I like this book but is there ever going to be a sex scene? "
Loving it!!!
"First off, I really like the plot and the characters. They feel real. I can't wait to see what'll happen next, I'm really eager for the next update. The only thing that needs improvement would be the mistakes when it come to phrasings, grammat or some punctuation. Very easy to fix, but it does not at all interfere with the reading of the story. "
Caught in Your Chaos
"Wonderfully written and very intriguing. I love to portrayal of the secretly smitten girl pretending to be uninterested in the guy due to his own cockiness. Jake and Amy have addictive chemistry, making it an all around fun read. I loved how the main character is a writer who portrays her own experiences into her writings, giving it her own flare of fantasization. It was like reading a book within a book. Bookception!"
Preliminary Review: Clichés work for a reason
"As much as I try to stay away from clichés, there is a reason why they work. But it takes a masterful craft to make a cliché work. After reading the first seven chapters of this book, to me it feels as clichéd as you can get. Still, contrary to my expectations, I found myself rather enjoying the pace of the novel rather than experiencing the usual cringe that a poorly-built cliché triggers in me. This is the author's best selling point in my opinion. They chose to go the cliché route, and they built the cliché with expert skill. They made the cliché work, which from my experience is no minor feat. Aside from that, there are a few details that make this story even more enjoyable for me overall: the fact that the main character is a writer, which creates a sense of familiarity and convergence with many readers who are also writers. It was an excellent choice for the protagonist. There's also the fact that the protagonist of the novel Amy writes, Arya, shares a similar name with her, showing how Amy wants to reflect herself on Arya yet she's not fully ready to admit she sees herself in her character. Every minor detail seems to be deliberately devised, which further showcases the author's skillful writing. The only negative aspect I can comment on is the existence of a few grammatical mistakes. Most of them aren't even serious, and not even worth mentioning if it wasn't for my nitpicky nature, but a rather big one that I found many times throughout the story is the absence of the question mark in most (if not all) questions in direct speech (AKA the dialogues between inverted commas). The reader will instinctively read this as a question but the question mark still needs to be there. Also, and this is completely unrelated to the technical review of the book, but, is it bad that, even though I know this story is all about Jake and Amy, I absolutely want her to be with Elijah instead?"
