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The Fallen Ones

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Summary

Falling. Briana was Dead

Status
5yrs ago
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Chapter 1

Falling.

That's all Brianna felt as she fell towards her inescapable death. The look of anguish that crossed her mother's face was terrible, and had permanently imprinted into her mind.

Falling, falling, falling.

She screamed, she cried, she clawed at anything that could stop her fall, but she continued to crash down.

"HELP!" she cried.

No reply.

Tears fell down her cheeks, and Brianna couldn't hold on any longer. She let go of her false hope, and accepted the truth.

She was going to die.

But still, a tiny flicker kept her from giving up. She wasn't done yet; the universe still needed her.

''Goodbye," something whispered.

Then

It

All

Went

Black.


"Wake up!" a voice shouted. Brianna shot up, her hands drenched with sweat, her temples aching, her mouth dry and sore, and her throat scratchy.

"Where am I?" she croaked. Just a figment of your imagination, she thought to herself. But she let herself dare to hope that this wasn't the end.

"Paradise."

Then it went black once more.
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