Decent Love ( Editing Wip) by Ria Mhrz at Inkitt
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Decent Love ( editing wip)

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Summary

Love isn't always having It's about care and trust Love isn't always having It's about care and trust Love isn't always about having It's about care and trust

Status
Complete
Chapters
9
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Chapter 1✓

Childrens scattered everywhere playing, laughing, giggling , running, sneaking. Park is full of children and their activities. Other people are too enjoying in the park, some are talking, some are taking walk, some are laughing.


We can see a lady in her early 50s sitting on a park bench carefully reading a newspaper article peacefully. A girl about 6 came running towards her. Seeing the little girl, she kept her newspaper aside.


The Little girl started request the lady to play with her, lady politely denied the girl.

Little girl started to insist more and more for her to come and play with her. Lady couldn't refuse to little one. Sighing she folded the newspaper keeping it on the bench she was residing on, she got up and went with the little one.


They both reached toward slide, the lady helped the little one on the slide. The girl started to insist her to slide along with her, she kept denying to the littles request. Seeing the denial little one started to pout with small upset look, looking at the upset one lady climbed onto slide and started to slide and play with the little one giggling now and then.



On the Opposite, there was a man in his mid 50s looking at the park form his house with the help of his binoculars. He was scanning the park when his eyes fell on giggling and sliding lady on the park. He became Statue, he couldn't move or utter anything. He kept on gawking the free giggling lady. This was love at first sight for him.



Nikolai lost his heart to the giggling lady in the park.



Here, unware of the attention she caught, Ramona enjoyed her fullest and played with the little girl
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