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Amazing!!

"A well written and amazing plot. The writer managed to maintain the suspense till the end. Way to go!"

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Fantastic

"Simply can be defined as - fantastic book! The writer has succeeded in creating and maintaining the suspense plot throughout the storyline. Considering the first attempt it is really remarkable that the story was on point and not unnecessarily stretched. Ignoring the initial grammar typos I would suggest the writer to pursue writing and explore more genres. I would love to check out more stories of yours. Well done!"

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Wow!!

"I am impressed! I loved everything. Each character seemed relatable and seeing things from different points of view is amazing! I was hanging on every word! Very, very good story! To be honest, you have some minor editing to do. Some of the wording seemed funny. Like I read it one way when it said something else. Just a few sentences need to be glossed over real good. That’s really all the critique I have. Awesome story! Keep up the good work! I can’t wait to see more from you! "

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What a riveting story!🤩

"This is the most compelling and mysterious story I have ever read..The book has no grammatical mistakes and is so readable. I really loved it. For those who have keen interest in mystery books , i would like to recommend this book.👍🤗"

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Fantastic!! Mystery maintained pretty well

"Wonderful usage of phrases and idioms. Very nice attempt"

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Fantastic!!

"To begin with, the story has been written very very well! The settings, the character development and the plot.. everything is just perfect! Good job author! Kuddos! I just love your writing style! Each and every chapter ends on a cliffhanger and this is one of the intriguing book I've ever read!! Fab work author! Keep shining!!! :)"

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Good work!

"I like the plot, although it is a bit to follow since there are a lot of characters and sometimes that can get a bit messy. There are a lot of grammar mistakes and you have large walls of text at some points, so I would try to break those up to make it a little easier to read. There was good mystery in there, and maybe slowing down the pace of the story would create a bit more suspense. Overall, it was good, I just think there needs to be some editing!"

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Interesting so far

"Waiting to know how Myra faces the challenge "

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