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Why Did The Vampires Heart Beat?

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Summary

When the female silhouette walked out from the shadows shock and fear rolled off me. It was her, the evil woman from my nightmares! With her walking towards us I could feel how evil she was. That’s weird, I can feel her evil, how? When Lachlan called her his beloved my heart shattered. Lachlan and the woman who is Gilda his beloved, locked eyes. A heavy weight seemed like it was crushing me. I was suffocating. I had to get out of there and away from her, from them. I had slipped off my shoes at dinner and used it to my advantage. I slowly stood taking care not to move the chair.

Status
Complete
Chapters
29
Rating
5.0 4 reviews
Age Rating
16+

Prologue

(Music by Christina Aguilera, “Just A Fool”)

When the female silhouette walked out from the shadows shock and fear rolled off me. It was her, the evil woman from my nightmares! With her walking towards us I could feel how evil she was. That’s weird, I can feel her evil, how? When Lachlan called her his beloved my heart shattered. Lachlan and the woman who is Gilda his beloved, locked eyes. A heavy weight seemed like it was crushing me. I was suffocating. I had to get out of there and away from her, from them. I had slipped off my shoes at dinner and used it to my advantage. I slowly stood taking care not to move the chair. Gilda still focused on Lachlan...................

Lachlan is a 962-year-old vampire that is tired of being alone in a world full of humans. He finds himself going to extremes to not be alone. After another failed attempt has him running in frustration where he stumbles on a scent, he has to find the source. He’s bored, wishing for death, and having no regard for life when he smells the most wonderful smell. He follows the scent, and He finds a 5-year-old little girl and he’s hungry! And then his heartbeats 💗 for the first time in hundreds of years, since he was turned, why??? Why did the Vampires heartbeat 💓? He’s determined to find out.

Ava is a 5-year-old little girl living with her grandmother in a small Missouri town. On her way to the pool for her swimming lessons she notices a stranger. Ava being the sweet little girl that she is offers the stranger help. Will he help her or himself?

Ava has been dealt a crappy hand in life and refuses to let anyone know what she’s really like. It’s easier if you don’t let anyone in. She’s put up some big walls. Will they crumble or grow so high no one can get through?

This is my version of vampires. I will explain them more in chapter 3.

The first 3 chapters are the pilot chapters so please give it a chance.

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Ava

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