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Why did the vampire heart beat?

"Very enjoyable."

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A good read

"I found reading this book enjoyable.it was relaxed and not overly dramatic. But I also found that some of the dynamics in the story were lacking. the storyline had a great focus on the vampire finding is soulmate but there did not seem to be any true story outline or back stage on the vampire on shadows of his past popping up like old memories. The girl showed more of a back storyline, but not much. These could use work. I would like to see more on the other characters that help out. Maybe more on the children."

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Why did the Vampires Heart Beat

"I love anything that has to do with Supernatural creatures. I like the Vampires long life. I am also happy Ava forgave Lachlan. "

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Why did the Vampire's heart beat

"Really loving this story so far 🥰 I can't wait to see how it ends! The story is very well written and intriguing ! So glad I found it ❤️ and ✝️🛐 s"

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