Chapter 1
"I'm sorry! I'm sorry! I'm sorry!" As the spirit groaned in the halls. Maya was there.


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"Sorry" was the last thing the little girl, Maya said. Ever since she was gone, everyone in her family thought of how she died. No one knew. Now, Maya is a spirit, haunting the halls of her home. Feeling guilt as she does.
"I'm sorry! I'm sorry! I'm sorry!" As the spirit groaned in the halls. Maya was there.
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