ALL BODIES ELECTRIC
A jarring story

"The undercurrent of humour throughout this novel is just brilliant! The protagonist Herman is too funny, and I haven’t read a story quite like this before. The very concept is quite intriguing, and although I’ve read only the first 4 chapters, I hope to see this book through to the end. The protagonist’s friend, Arturo, is quite mystical, and although I haven’t developed a connection to him yet, I look forward to see how his story unfolds. I have one question - Is it true? I mean do people actually have sex on electrified beds? I just wanted to know because the concept of the story is quite jarring and I can’t imagine anyone in any cult agreeing to do something so drastic. A really well-written story, and I hope to read more of your work soon. I pray that this book gets published!"

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Too Detailed.

"It has officially lost my attention at the 60th page. The detail and clarity very well thought out and explained but it lacks any real action. A man trying to learn how to date again is only so interesting for so long. "

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