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Thrilling and Magical

"The effortless balance between world-building, character development, and plot progression was done in a way that kept me immersed and provided direction for my addled brain. Great writing makes you feel, and my emotions were all over as I got to learn the characters and follow their journey in these chapters. The only thing that can improve upon the reading experience is some translation text or glossary for the native language spoken by some of the inhabitants. Some of the plot devices may be cliched, but the way it’s written makes all the difference. They’re woven together with intention and not haphazardly thrown in for shits and giggles. And the dialogue is so memorable and scattered with humor, ugh, I could go ooooonnn. But if you made it this far in my review, you may as well just read the book. You can thank me later. 😉"

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Loving it!

"I just recently had covid and it was a very hard time however this book really helped divert my mind and cheer me up 🙏 Can’t wait to read the rest! "

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love love love

"I just came across this today and read all chapters in one go and I am no reader. there is so much imagination and it is also such a fast read. I didn't think it was possible for me to be so engrossed. I need to know what happens next"

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It gets better with every page!

"I’ve truly enjoyed working on this book and though I know every comma and corner of this manuscript, when I open it to a page, I still get pulled into Demon’s world for hours. If you like epic fantasy, this book is a must! "

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Best Fiction

"I have read loads of fiction and I can safely say that this is one of the most gripping stories I have read so far! I am in love with the characters and the kind of imagination that has been used to put this together is incredible. Some might say I am going too far but I keep comparing it to Harry potter series as the level of imagination used here is pretty much the same as J K Rowling has used. I cant wait to read the rest of this story and i would recommend everyone to give this one time if you are looking to get transported into the kind of world that is so refreshingly different from the usual plots we read."

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So good I'm putting an extra five stars here ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

"Absolutely delightfully unputdownable. Kept me at the edge of my seat and made me laugh my butt off at times. "

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Zeez

"So far I have enjoyed reading this novel. I look forward to reading the remaining chapters. "

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Hooked!

"OMG! The first chapters have me hooked which is surprising because it usually takes time to get into a book I cannot wait to read more when will you post the next chapters? New review, I am 11 chapters in and I gotta say this is a fantastic read. so much fun"

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loving it!

"This is such a fun book to read. I love the banter between Demon and Aoife. it reads very fast too so there is no dull moment"

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Aiofe and Demon: Cursed be the Syhlain

"The main character is an 18 year old girl coping with being suddenly thrown into an fantasy realm of demons, powerful beings and magic. Hoping the heroine starts growing into her prophecized role rather than moping in moody teenage angst."

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