Inkitt
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love you book!!

"i find the story really good... i have read the comments of people wishing for bigger chapters but if i could suggest one thing dont worry bout length, however, start each chapter with whos perspective were in... in some books author's change chapters when they are going to someone elses perspective and title the chapter with that persons name so readers can follow along knowing whos head their inside, sometimes making chapters only 2 pages long. I love you first book and can't wait for more of the second which is amazing as well, you should try to publish :)"

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Down with the monarchy

"I love this sequel and i Loved the first book "

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Unique fantasy

"This book may only been two chapters right now but if it is anything like the last one it will be full of twists, turns and ingenious writing with wonderful characters. The plot is fantastic and even though it’s fantasy the unlike a fairytale relationships make’s it relatable. I would recommend reading ‘down end road’ first before delving into this story though."

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Down with the monarchy

"Whilst I love this I'm a little disappointed that there isn't more information on Alex and Myra's last 12 months. Being apart. Being threatened. More information on the group that is trying to destroy everything Myra is trying to fix. What's the real reason they want the lifeforms in the portals to die? I know you will get to it, I have faith in you. Look forward to the rest. Keep up the great work"

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