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The Jeweled curse
"I love everything about this book, can't wait to read part 2 "
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The bEst
"Best till i have ever read"
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I love it
"It was the most heart warming but heart breaking story ever and I want the next part right away. It kept me hooked until the end even though there were a couple mistakes it was truly amazing. I think this book could go far if it wanted to "
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Awesome read
"An action-packed, mystical adventure awaits anyone wishing to read this novel. I’m amazed at how well you’ve managed to flesh out the characters in this book, and I hope to read more of your work. I’ve read books about goblins and elves and all that mumbo-jumbo before, and most accounts of these creatures are quite similar. However, in your story, the goblins were completely different from what I usually perceive them to be. So it was quite an interesting read for me. Your writing style is extremely descriptive, and I enjoyed reading the story. You have excellent diction and your grammar and punctuation is spot on! Minute details like this make a good story, and you’ve included enough detail to keep me glued to the novel till the end. I haven’t read the whole thing yet, but I will soon enough. Good luck with your writing, and I hope to see this book published soon!"
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The quest
"The story is good but the author is introducing to many characters along the way. It makes the story not to be beliavable"
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