The Night Malvada Came by jazzypepper1 at Inkitt
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The Night Malvada Came

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Summary

Two best friends get stuck with the devils cousin, Malvada. They don't know it's all in stages until it's almost too late. Malvada is playing mind tricks on the girls, and there is no way to escape her until there is.

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
8
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

April

"Bye, goodnight mom!" I yelled through my door as I got ready to go to bed. We had a family get together earlier that day with all my family from California. My hamster Stella was already up racing on her hamster wheel. Before I go to bed I usually read for an hour or two but tonight I just didn't feel right. That's weird I thought to myself ,I always read. Why do I feel this way? I thought again. Whatever it's probably just because mom left so early. I decided to call my best friend car, short for Carmen. She always takes my mind off of things. The only problem is that I don't know what my mind is on, besides that weird feeling in my gut tugging on my brain aching to tell me something. I'm not sure it knows either. I picked up my phone and dialed her number. "Hey, whats up!?" Carmen squealed into the phone. "Ouch!" I said back. "Oh sorry, I guess I just am happy to hear your voice." Carmen replied "That's okay I get it. I was just gonna tell you, Carmen, that I have this weird feeling in my gut." I said. She paused for a moment then asked, "Is it because your momm left so early tonight?"

I already knew the answer to this question, I had asked myself this before."No, but it kinda makes me feel like something bad is about to happen, and i cant read." I said finally.

“Only something important bugs you enough that you can't read.” She said in a sing-song voice There’s a loud creak like the sound of a door opening. Carmen gasps and suddenly goes quiet. It’s 3:00 A.M. why would someone be paying her a visit right now of all times! “Carmen, are you okay?” I asked unsure. “ I think there’s someone in the house.” She whispered. It's amazing how she can be so calm in a dangerous situation, even an intruder doesn’t faze her at all. I listened carefully into the phone. “April! I hear something, and it's not a human noise at all! You need to come right now! Bring the book!” She was almost shouting now that the noises were getting closer and louder. “Okay! Im coming.” I shouted. I hung up and rummaged like a mad man to find my shoes and grab a jacket. “Dad! Carmen needs me!” I yelled to my dad as I sprinted out the door and around the block.























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