Funny

"Note to author: I'll change this or delete it if you want, seeing as I know you'll see this first before anyone else. The story for it being chapter-long I can't really comment on. Like it was funny but I would like to read more to get into the meat of it. Because I'm one of those people that strongly believe that it takes five chapters of a book to actually be hooked into it. So does this book intrigues me? The answer is no. Plus it's still looking to be in the editing phase which is not a problem. I think one could easily read this and ignore the not-so-subtle mistakes and still find the humor within it."