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A gift with a gift

"Amazing and great plot. Thank you author. "

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Moving

"A wonderful story of love, hope, and sorrow. This was a moving story and I loved reading it. But be warned the ending is a whole new story, one that is not 100% happy."

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A gift with a gift

"I completely loved this! "

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A Gift With A Gift

"OMG awesome!"

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A Gift With A Gift

"I loved it!!!!!!!!!!!💖💗💌💓💞💞💝💝❤️❣️❣️💕 Never read anything like it before!!!!!!!!!!😍😍😍😍🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰 I was a very heart-warming story!!!!!!!!!💖💗💗💌💓💞💞💞💝💝❣️💕💕 100000000000000000/10 would recommend!!!!!!!!!!!!💗💌💞💞💝❤️❣️💕💕"

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Wow

"Amazing book cant wait for more"

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Beautiful touching story

"Amazing story"

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"A Gift With A Gift"

"Valerie, liked your story immensely. Your Characters could use a bit more description, but their interaction was likable and normal for kids in high school..........Always a jealous bully, With Angelica being the target. Friends stand by friends. The confusion with the different name of Angelica was a nice twist, confusing her boyfriend, girl friend and Father.........just to start...........well done Valerie. You have opened a normal teen life change into a mystery and a plot change...............your are a gifted writer, Author................... william elliott kern Dead or Alive https://www.inkitt.com/stories/fantasy/185550 Do a review for me too.please"

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Realistic.

"Heartbreaking."

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An Easy Read with Deep Insights

"This story's plot is a very interesting one. The way that Angelica goes on in her everyday life with the other characters is very relatable to the reader and allows for them to become emotionally invested in the story. The fantasy elements add a bit of magic to the tale, making it very unique and adding to the plot. It was a very interesting work that I found an easy read with a compelling plot and characters as well as filled with emotions that engulf the reader. **Notes for the author in the comments. :)"

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Wonderful

"In the beginning, the story seemed as an ordinary teenage story with outcasts and the popular ones, with a nerd and a mean girl. However, it turned out to be something much, much different and I ended up enjoying it immensely. The beginning itself is powerful, gripping and grasping, hinting at the fact that the story was not going to be ordinary. The whole story is wonderfully written, it made me sympathize with and feel for Angelica and Jeremy, as well as Jeremy’s mother. It is so easy to read, but yet so deep. I believe that this story could not have ended in any other way. I was said to see Angelica go, to see how her own sacrifice, her good deed, came with a price. And a price which she herself paid. However, her gift may be a sign of freedom and she may have finally got that freedom in the end. Wonderful story."

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Good storyline

"Good storyline. Gramnar needs work though "

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A gift with a gift

"I don't like haw the story ended. I think that there should be a continuation. I love this story I think it's a great story. "

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a gift with a gift

"i recomend you to find other story like this in w3bnvl"

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a gift with a gift

"i'm sad the story is over. i need more story like this"

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a gift with a gift

"this story has an easy plot"

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a gift with a gift

"beautiful story"

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A Gift with A Gift

"i like this story. this story tells the story of a teenage romance"

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