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Alpha

"This book is awesome so far"

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Alphas family

"Nice short story "

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Leeanne5

"I absolutely loved this novel, great writing. 💜 I'm looking forward to reading more."

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Keep writing you are talented

"Nice story so relaxing & l like family stories "

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I loved it!

"I loved the plot! I wanted to know what happened to Henry, I feel incomplete. Damn that is a lot of kids, awesome job. Please keep writing "

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Alpha's family

"Nice short story, although I didn't like the way she treated her biological father - that was very unfair"

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Emotional

"I love the story. I realize it was your first and needs some work, so I won't say much other than it would have been nice if she could have worked out things with her father. The story was cute but also short. The ending was abrupt. Otherwise a good story. Made me smile."

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