What is your opinion?
Fantastic!!!
"So the plot was great don't get me wrong. I think it's one of the better bible/fantasy/horror/Sci-Fi that I've read. And for any out there that are wanting to read this, I suggest you should, especially if you like stories related to the bible or the ideology of the devil in stories. Either way, this was a fantastic read and I hope it continues."
Very Good Plot!
"Very original plot, I haven't read anything quite like this. Reminds me a bit of Shadowhunters, but with enough of a twist that it certainly is original. I usually don't like prologues since they're often unnecessary, but I actually really liked yours and thought it gave good context for the book. I'm not Christian nor have I ever read the Bible, so it was good backstory for me to understand what was going on since I wasn't super familiar. Your style is very engaging, I like the pacing of the story as well. However, there are many grammar and spelling mistakes, as I'm sure you know, so a round of editing would be really helpful. Also, I'm pretty sure ministers are ordained not ordinated? I think if you've been ordained, you're an ordinate, but the actual process is being ordained. I'm not sure though, but ordinated just sounded strange to me so I'd check that out. Overall, very interesting story and great idea! Your writing has great bones, I just think the grammar needs to be fleshed out more so it doesn't take away from the clear skill you have. Good luck and keep going!"
