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Black, Two Sugars and a Dash of Milk

"Good fanfiction."

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Simple and sweet

"I really liked how the author explored their relationship. The characters felt mature and it was nice to get a glimpse of how they would be as officemates."

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I Ship It!

"this is amazing I never knew how much I could ship something and I do I ship this sooooooooooo much and you made them seem soooo much like the actual characters it was great it was like I was reading the actual books again. Thank You Sooooooo Much."

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A++

"As mentioned in the review I wrote about your latest book, Sacrifice, the characters are beautifully interpreted. The plot is refreshingly new and your style is out of this world."

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this story

"I really loved this and it was super entertaining you must write more!!!"

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Terrifically imaginative short story

"Hermione and Malfoy, who knew? This is a delightfully creative fanfic of what might be. Fan fiction is sometimes difficult to read because it's not very well written. Fan fiction is too often just a *take a new character and plug in somewhere else*. This, however, is truly good fan fiction. The story takes known characters and gives them a new whole new look. It's well written and by the end you're wishing it could be a full story. Nicely done to the author. To readers....it's worth your time to read."

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Adorable!

"I enjoyed this story so much. My only complaint was its length- I need more. Which, is suppose isn’t really a complaint after all, is it? Looking forward to what your mind comes up with next. "

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