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HIDDEN PATH : The Case of Haunting Girl

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Summary

The story about the two teenage girls who solve crimes around them….this story will be filled with be many mystery, thriller and horror events ….the two girls will be team up with retired police officer and solve crimes together…..during their journey they will come across many unusual cases….it will be fun to see how these three meet up as well as solve the each cases….

Status
Complete
Chapters
10
Rating
3.0 1 review
Age Rating
13+

Chapter 1

Haseena and Karishma were coming from delivering the cakes to the house….after the last case they both agreed to give a try to their friendship one more time and this time they promised each other whatever happens between they would not lie…so in order to spend the vacation Haseena decided to work with her best friend in the bakery shop…..Karishma too happy that she get to spend time but also afraid what if she does the same mistake before….she doesn’t want the misunderstanding to come between them as they already lost the beautiful bond…keeping these things aside they ready to bond again…

While coming back to the bakery shop, they see a large crowd near the house…they also goes there and sees the family is taken by the police….Karishma and Haseena also looks at the ambulance where dead body being taken inside…she can’t see whose body but can feel that the person must important for the family as they are begging them to leave and telling the police they didn’t do anything….but the police didn’t listen to them and makes them sit inside the car…

Karishma goes near the bike stander and asks him what happened….

“their daughter had been murdered…. people are saying that the parents murdered their own daughter…. but they are not sure about it….” says the man while seeing scenery in front of them…

Karishma nods and looks at the parents who were crying inside the car…she feels bad for them and also thinks why would they kill their own daughter….Haseena too joins her and Karishma tells her what she learned….after sometime all leaves the place one by one…as the police already gone…..Haseena looks at house and feels something strange about it….Karishma observers her and holds her hand…

“Are you alright…” ask Karishma in concern…

“Yeah…. just feels strange about everything…seeing the house...I don’t know why….” says Haseena whose eyes were only fixed on the house…

“maybe after listening to news about them…you might feel like that…come on let’s go…father will be waiting for us….” says Karishma while pulling Haseena with her as she doesn’t want to see anything which make her disturb….

They reach the bakery and gets on their work but Haseena still thinks about the events happened in that house…. later in the evening after their work, they goes to their home... Karishma walks with Haseena to her home….as she is worried about her who hasn’t talked to her the whole time….they reach Haseena house and Karishma grabs her hand to get her attention….Haseena shocking looks at her and sees the worried line on Karishma face….

“I know what you are thinking but it’s just an incident…stop overthinking about it which makes you disturb….I don’t like when you became silent…so plzz don’t do this…..” says Karishma calmly..

“I know…but I couldn’t stop thinking about that incident…I felt like something is there….” Haseena says rubbing her forehead…

“Don’t worry everything will be alright…. tomorrow morning I will pick you up and together ,we go to the bakery….ok….” said Karishma…

Haseena nods her head and gives a small smile….Karishma too smiles and bid goodbye to her and goes to her home on her bike…Haseena watches her go and goes inside to her house where she finds her mother making something in the kitchen…seeing her daughter she becomes happy and hugs her tightly and tells her to freshen up as she made special dinner for her….Haseena smiles widely and goes to her room and later she has dinner with her mother with lot of talking about random things…

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