This story contains themes of: depression, suicide
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A collection of poems that started as a project for a creative writing class and morphed into an entity I feel compelled to share.
Based on the song “Boy Division” by My Chemical Romance
They should be very afraid of him.
He used to walk among them.
He knows their secrets.
He’s not their friend anymore.
He’s not dead,
he only looks that way.
They mock him,
and they think he doesn’t know.
He is isolated and alone,
left to his own devices.
They think he is another lost cause.
But it made him stronger.
They should be very afraid of him,
he used to walk among them.
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